I'd never thought about punctuation in this way before - that it's not random rules to be enforced… | by Todd Brison

First, there is a comma missing after “road,” which throws off the rhythm of the sentence. Second, talking about a narrow, dirty road and bare, dry branches does not give me summer vibes. Fo…
How to Write a Bad First Page for Your Novel
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I'd never thought about punctuation in this way before - that it's not random rules to be enforced, but markers that help our brains digest what we're reading.
Good stuff <3
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