Michael — I took the liberty of checking it out ;)
Story is good, so I’ll comment on the use of the feature.
I want you to start thinking of telling this story in slow motion. Release a chapter at a time, and use 5x the amount of cards. Think — where would it be natural for people to “turn the page?” In this atmosphere, tapping > scrolling.
Love that you are diving straight in to this! 👍🏻❤👏🏻